How would you feel when school will get rid of school?
I think schools shouldn’t get rid of uniforms Because, if the schools get rid of school uniforms the students will get bullied in school. They’ll compare how expensive clothes they’re wearing and also the school rating will go down. If students won’t wear uniform’s this might cause a lot of Bullying, Self-conscious and terrified.
In school students get bullied for different kinds of reason’s and there is a lot of reason. If schools got rid of uniform’s these takes to a reason that students get bullied, how?, well first of all they compare their clothes to each other for example, I'm wearing the most expensive and branded shoes, and the other student is wearing a cheap pair of shoe so they get picked up by rich students. But not only shoes they also compare their accessories, etc.
Students get Self-conscious (Embarrassed) every single time, now you're wanting to know how do students get embarrassed by wearing clothes. Well first thing, talking about school uniforms students don’t get embarrassed if all of them are wearing the same uniforms but when it comes to mufti or schools got rid of uniforms students get self-conscious because they don’t know what to wear or not or even though they go to school in their mufti clothes they’ll be shy, they’ll be confused pretty much.
In school students try to look cool, stunning other sorts of stuff, but their friends or other students don’t know what's the secret behind him or her for being cool. Student’s wearing cool clothes makes them look cool but their friends won’t know how expensive or cheap are the clothes, so when students wear cool clothes to make them self look cool but they are terrified because most of them don’t want to let their friends or other students around them know that it’s a cheap type of clothes and if that happened they’ll get bullied and getting exposed in front of students.
Another thing about not wearing school uniforms is that people and students from outside can get in school easily because they'll be wearing random clothes and not school uniforms. This can cause a lot of problems in schools. So should we keep uniforms or not??
Great writing, Nishnit!
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