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Monday, 22 July 2019

English Essay Writing

In English, we have been doing Essay writing and I was supposed to finish this last term and I'm posting this term which is quite dumb but that's me... I have done my all paragraphs but the thing I messed up was I created different docs for two different paragraphs and now I can't find it because I didn't name it which is dumb of me. 
This is my first two paragraphs but the second paragraph is not completed because it's on other docs that I cannot find it.

 Chapter 47

“You fight for a man who will always hate you just because of what you are.”

In this Scene, Zelie releases a heavy sigh. “ You fight for a man who will always hate you just because of what you are.” This means Inan fights for his father to protect Orisha and destroy magic. Even though his father hates him but Inan still fights for him. Inan is a maji as well but his father doesn’t know about it, this happens in life too where a person is in trouble and the other person tries to fight and help that person even though the first person hates him, also friends as well. 
Chapter 79

“He’s a stranger. A Soldier. The shell of little prince”

In this Scene, King Saran tortured Zelie and its interesting about how Zelie became an empty “shell”. Zelie believed in Inan but he trapped Zeilie in the truth of his betrayal. 
In Universal, human beings do torture each other, going back in days when it comes to slavery there are people that kidnap or betrayal to each other the same as in this chapter.
So this was my first two paragraphs that I had it and my other two are lost so if I'll be able to find it than I can post it today or else I have to make a new one which I don't want to do it.



1 comment:

  1. I understand the mistake you made. It's easy enough to do that. What matters is learning for next time, yeah?

    As for your work so far: You've done well at writing about what is going on in these scenes and making links to the real world.
    Your next steps are to name your google docs in future! :)
    (If you update this, please email me about it).

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